There is one thing I am sure of
My grandmother was the woman who influenced my childhood
In such a matter that I used to dream about dying next to her when I'll get old
But time has passed and I left the house in which
I used to wake up listening to her voice
One day she told me
Careful little person there is a strange world out there
She never said dangerous and never advised me to be afraid
Just to be careful because the monsters you'll meet are pretty and friendly
They'll drag you after them to some killing fields
She always said look up little child tonight stars will fall
But don’t you fall apart even if the one you love most goes to Sarajevo
And never comes back just listen to the radio
Your friends will keep your dreams alive but you will know how to shred them
Better than anybody else look up little kid look up there is a wonderful world out there
Don’t strangle the desire to go and seek what is hidden in the dark
Why should you be afraid when no one else knows how to
No no my child you don’t need to disappoint me I am old and dying
But still happy
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the first half is really good
Virgil -
the first half is really good (although a bit too much explanation). in the second half things are falling apart.... a bit.
I wish I would know where the
Madalina Cauneac -
I wish I would know where the first half ends and where it starts to fall apart, even if at the moment I don't feel like changing anything. Thanks for passing by.:)
aici
nicodem -
"Just to be careful because the monsters I will meet are pretty and friendly
They will drag me after them as much as I wanted to keep her alive all my life
She always said look up little child tonight stars will fall
But don’t you fall apart even if the one you love most goes to Sarajevo
And never comes back just listen to the radio"
e un pic aglomerat textul. eu as schimba modul de adresare astfel:
Just to be careful because the monsters you'll meet are pretty and friendly
They'll drag you after them to some killing fields
She always said look up little child tonight stars will fall
But don’t you fall apart even if the one you love most goes to Sarajevo
And never comes back just listen to the radio
astfel ai face o legatura intre Sarajevo si ce s-a intamplat pe acolo...
mai gandeste-te.
Hmm, Nicholas, actually I
Madalina Cauneac -
Hmm, Nicholas, actually I think this is a pretty good sugestion. Thanks!