Trinity -

'I did it my way..'
as birds scratch the sky
so the clouds can bleed
feathers and fear
over a world in greed
we watch with our hands
soft and ready to kill
for whatever we love
or the secrets we seal
collapsed in the same
cull de sack of the mind
thoughts linger alone
in the land of the blind
we never surrender
when sick or in love
become pure and tender
in God’s fist a dove
and good lies in bad
when the worse fills our hope
are you ready to die?
are you ready to cope?
are you ready to give?
are you ready to take?
I’m checking my time
and is almost to late
so pardon my French when I
turn 'round and say
despair was for sissies
'I did it my way'
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iata un text care mi-a facut bine
Virgil -
iata un text care mi-a facut bine astazi prin simplitatea lui. inclin sa cred ca daca tot nu s-au folosit majusculele la inceputul versurilor atunci se putea renunta de tot la orice conventie tipografico-lexicala. dar asta este doar o chestiune de gust personal. primele doua versuri sint memorabile.
"as birds scratch the sky
so the clouds can bleed"...
dar si
"we never surrender
when sick or in love"...
la?. Dear Mr Picky, F l-am lasat
Trinity -
la?..
Dear Mr Picky,
F l-am lasat in caz ca francezii mi-ar declara razboi (nu ca l-ar si cistiga!) iar I-ul din principiu..
so, thank you!:p
Corina