Trinity -
displacements
I am a speed dialled emotion
an ex-employee from hell
my name
is
written in capitals
all over narrow alley walls
where blood traded its lingered beauty
in kind
the wind envies me
for the way I blow
into oblivion
the unforgettable truth
and its reason
disguised in a moment
of adorned power
a flightless bird
is flapping its wings out of instinct
this is the apology of a tsunami
on the peaceful shore
of a Sunday morning
my trail is a promise
but I will pass
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Comentarii
remarc
Virgil -
remarc un text reusit despre un subiect rar abordat (if ever). Se observa (in umila mea parere) un talent evident chiar daca uneori poate prea bine controlat de o cumpatare a exprimarii. Sau poate m-am prea obisnuit eu sa tot citesc "bombasticisme". E placut, in orice caz, sa nu traiesti cu teama ca la primul colt te va izbi o metafora prost aleasa. Si asa este cazul, se pare, cu Trinity.
about displacements....
Trinity -
Virgil, am vorbit chiar acum cu Trinity si, desi era fisticita (ca ea nu stie sa primeasca usor complimente), mi-a zis sa-ti transmit salutari si ca va mai scrie asa...sau altfel:). ...Si asa este cazul, se pare, cu Trinity.