Virgil -
...
we don’t exist
we just try
looking thru the thick bottle bottom glass
we float inside loneliness
like ephemerides
please don’t think of us
don’t even mention us during dinner
or during those long hours of idle talk
when rain never stops
and the dreams are grey
nobody knows our plan
but we try
to escape the dictionary
and the perpetual tendency
to exist
Lingua:
Comentarii
looking thru the thick
nicodem -
acolo, la botle, n-ar trebui sa fie bottle?
mulțumesc pentru corectură.
Virgil -
mulțumesc pentru corectură. inițial a fost cum trebuie, apoi am făcut niște schimbări și s-au încurcat lucrurile.
it is a ..
Trinity -
'grey' text..which reminds me of London..So all I have to do is look out the window (through the thick double-glazed window) and see your poem..:p
It fits well with November..
Cheers
so, I guess, I should call it
Virgil -
so, I guess, I should call it a success...